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50ShadesOfAss
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Its all over the place and confusing It seems like a crack fic only not meant to be taken seriously. Or author is just trying to add comedy but nothing about this is funny The mc seems stupid and you have no idea whats going on while reading. Idek how to describe it. Its just asś

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Boruto: Jar of Hearts

Claire_D_Believer

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dayumm! that was harsh sempai XD I admit that I still don't have a plot and just writes wherever come to my mind, which is making the story rather hard to understand. I would still be ignorant of that if you hadn't pointed it out :3 But I'm really enjoying writing it and when someone comments or say something, it feels so fulfilling! So I'm not giving up anytime soon! thanks for your time ! yours truly♡ with love :3