Most annoying mc ever , childish aswell e_e but im not a hater , so here is 5 stars ------------------------------------------------------------------
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LIKEHe also doesn't have sense of privacy, the ones that invade to others personal space and keep harassing and annoying them.. He's fucking 15, not in childcare anymore... He doesn't have any restrains or manners in having social communication among peers, doesn't have respect to authorities such like teachers and doctors, like what he do to Cammentos and Revovery Girl, the ones that tries to do their jobs to oversee and nurse back injury children until MC distracted with his annoying behaviour.. There's have another times and places to be childish, but in serious environment that requires people to do their jobs, he's better restrains himself.. Show some professional attributes to the ones that you want to impress..
cuddlypanda:Thanks for the review:) also what about the mc did you find annoying other than the being childish
Thank you :) i know i struggled writing a cheerful mc that didnt become annoying and i guess it still happened :( ill work on the later chapters so that he isnt so annoying hopefully, and ill make him less childish or at least Act properly during the correct moments. if you decide to keep reading let me know if i fixed it so he can become a charwcter you enjoy rather than one that annoys you
AmiOnigase:He also doesn't have sense of privacy, the ones that invade to others personal space and keep harassing and annoying them.. He's fucking 15, not in childcare anymore... He doesn't have any restrains or manners in having social communication among peers, doesn't have respect to authorities such like teachers and doctors, like what he do to Cammentos and Revovery Girl, the ones that tries to do their jobs to oversee and nurse back injury children until MC distracted with his annoying behaviour.. There's have another times and places to be childish, but in serious environment that requires people to do their jobs, he's better restrains himself.. Show some professional attributes to the ones that you want to impress..
Too late, already add to library, guess I will see to the end the continuous of this fic..
cuddlypanda:Thank you :) i know i struggled writing a cheerful mc that didnt become annoying and i guess it still happened :( ill work on the later chapters so that he isnt so annoying hopefully, and ill make him less childish or at least Act properly during the correct moments. if you decide to keep reading let me know if i fixed it so he can become a charwcter you enjoy rather than one that annoys you