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VeraeLv43yr
2021-02-04 11:20

Most annoying mc ever , childish aswell e_e but im not a hater , so here is 5 stars ------------------------------------------------------------------

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cuddlypanda
cuddlypandaAuthor

Thanks for the review:) also what about the mc did you find annoying other than the being childish

AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4

Its annoying man, Childish Airhead like Nejire is ok, but his childish is more like forces to the point it become unbearable that us readers been annoy with it..

cuddlypanda:Thanks for the review:) also what about the mc did you find annoying other than the being childish
AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4

He also doesn't have sense of privacy, the ones that invade to others personal space and keep harassing and annoying them.. He's fucking 15, not in childcare anymore... He doesn't have any restrains or manners in having social communication among peers, doesn't have respect to authorities such like teachers and doctors, like what he do to Cammentos and Revovery Girl, the ones that tries to do their jobs to oversee and nurse back injury children until MC distracted with his annoying behaviour.. There's have another times and places to be childish, but in serious environment that requires people to do their jobs, he's better restrains himself.. Show some professional attributes to the ones that you want to impress..

cuddlypanda:Thanks for the review:) also what about the mc did you find annoying other than the being childish
cuddlypanda
cuddlypandaAuthor

Thank you :) i know i struggled writing a cheerful mc that didnt become annoying and i guess it still happened :( ill work on the later chapters so that he isnt so annoying hopefully, and ill make him less childish or at least Act properly during the correct moments. if you decide to keep reading let me know if i fixed it so he can become a charwcter you enjoy rather than one that annoys you

AmiOnigase:He also doesn't have sense of privacy, the ones that invade to others personal space and keep harassing and annoying them.. He's fucking 15, not in childcare anymore... He doesn't have any restrains or manners in having social communication among peers, doesn't have respect to authorities such like teachers and doctors, like what he do to Cammentos and Revovery Girl, the ones that tries to do their jobs to oversee and nurse back injury children until MC distracted with his annoying behaviour.. There's have another times and places to be childish, but in serious environment that requires people to do their jobs, he's better restrains himself.. Show some professional attributes to the ones that you want to impress..
AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4

Too late, already add to library, guess I will see to the end the continuous of this fic..

cuddlypanda:Thank you :) i know i struggled writing a cheerful mc that didnt become annoying and i guess it still happened :( ill work on the later chapters so that he isnt so annoying hopefully, and ill make him less childish or at least Act properly during the correct moments. if you decide to keep reading let me know if i fixed it so he can become a charwcter you enjoy rather than one that annoys you
cuddlypanda
cuddlypandaAuthor

Thanks for giving it a chance, and please continue to give me feedback so i cant tell what need improvement or if the character or situation comes out bad

AmiOnigase:Too late, already add to library, guess I will see to the end the continuous of this fic..
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