Review Detail of SCARLETZEE in The Goblin's Feast

Just read the first chapter.. It’s fun to read.. But I think you use too many low frequency vocabularies, make it hard for the non-english-speaking readers like me to read comfortably.. I keep checking the google translate😂 but good for me, I can learn more.. thanks to you kuya😁 And I think you need to be more consistent in using indirect speech.. you keep mixing past and present in your indirect speech.. Best of luck, author👌🏻