Review Detail of Muhammad_Usama1 in The Goblin's Feast

kuhaku_sora:Thanks for the review! Much appreciated it! However, I don't remember adding or hitting any religion in particular. This is a story and a world that I have created. Then, gods and other godesses are also created by me. If it's blasphemy, then I would have defiled or done such things portraying to any specific religion. So, everything that I wrote here is A WORK OF FICTION. I may have forgotten writing it down in the front page (because I knew that it's already common sense). Please don't confuse reality and fiction, my friend. I understand your goal, but please think twice before sending something or reviewing the story 1 star because of improper critics. I know what I am doing. I respect your opinion, but I will delete this soon after if you'd not give ma reply within 12 hours and deem it as a hate comment. If it's a critic, please explain further my claim against THIS BOOK BEING A WORK OF FICTION. Everything I wrote about gods and godesses are purely intended to build the world; not to start a cult or suggest immoral acts.

kuhaku_sora:Thanks for the review! Much appreciated it! However, I don't remember adding or hitting any religion in particular. This is a story and a world that I have created. Then, gods and other godesses are also created by me. If it's blasphemy, then I would have defiled or done such things portraying to any specific religion. So, everything that I wrote here is A WORK OF FICTION. I may have forgotten writing it down in the front page (because I knew that it's already common sense). Please don't confuse reality and fiction, my friend. I understand your goal, but please think twice before sending something or reviewing the story 1 star because of improper critics. I know what I am doing. I respect your opinion, but I will delete this soon after if you'd not give ma reply within 12 hours and deem it as a hate comment. If it's a critic, please explain further my claim against THIS BOOK BEING A WORK OF FICTION. Everything I wrote about gods and godesses are purely intended to build the world; not to start a cult or suggest immoral acts.

kuhaku_sora:no worries, my friend. I've done a little searching and found out (somehow) that creating a cult or people worshiping the religion of the story would be included in "blasphemy" or may be violating a rule similar to it. I respect every religion in the world and I am so careful of relating it in my story. The presence of gods in the story are similar to the Greeks and mythical beings created by man; not something sacrilegious or the like. The man that claimed himself a god in the second chapter is a reference to gandalf ( the wizard) and the demon lord (in the near future) is the most powerful being (in my world) that uses dark magic. I'm sorry if the story bothered you, mate, but this particular is not related to "blasphemy" or attacking any religion at all. Let's take the bible as an example. "thou shall not put God's name in vain". I am not striking the nail of Jesus or any other saints or the holy trinity but this world has its own religion that they're believing in. If i did include any bible references or other religions that would be another story. they are called gods because of their power to create (in my fictional novel where magic exists). thats all that there is.

kuhaku_sora:no worries, my friend. I've done a little searching and found out (somehow) that creating a cult or people worshiping the religion of the story would be included in "blasphemy" or may be violating a rule similar to it. I respect every religion in the world and I am so careful of relating it in my story. The presence of gods in the story are similar to the Greeks and mythical beings created by man; not something sacrilegious or the like. The man that claimed himself a god in the second chapter is a reference to gandalf ( the wizard) and the demon lord (in the near future) is the most powerful being (in my world) that uses dark magic. I'm sorry if the story bothered you, mate, but this particular is not related to "blasphemy" or attacking any religion at all. Let's take the bible as an example. "thou shall not put God's name in vain". I am not striking the nail of Jesus or any other saints or the holy trinity but this world has its own religion that they're believing in. If i did include any bible references or other religions that would be another story. they are called gods because of their power to create (in my fictional novel where magic exists). thats all that there is.

kuhaku_sora:no worries, my friend. I've done a little searching and found out (somehow) that creating a cult or people worshiping the religion of the story would be included in "blasphemy" or may be violating a rule similar to it. I respect every religion in the world and I am so careful of relating it in my story. The presence of gods in the story are similar to the Greeks and mythical beings created by man; not something sacrilegious or the like. The man that claimed himself a god in the second chapter is a reference to gandalf ( the wizard) and the demon lord (in the near future) is the most powerful being (in my world) that uses dark magic. I'm sorry if the story bothered you, mate, but this particular is not related to "blasphemy" or attacking any religion at all. Let's take the bible as an example. "thou shall not put God's name in vain". I am not striking the nail of Jesus or any other saints or the holy trinity but this world has its own religion that they're believing in. If i did include any bible references or other religions that would be another story. they are called gods because of their power to create (in my fictional novel where magic exists). thats all that there is.

Muhammad_Usama1:brother.. You say that people believe in them so they are gods because they have the power to create..Brother, not everything that can creat is called God.. Suppose we humans can now create clones and other living organisms out of a single cell.. So will be called Gods according to those clones and living beings created by us?? . For someone to qualify as a God, there are four criteria 1. God is eternal. 2. God has no beginning and no end. 3. God is not begotten and does not beget. 4. None is equivalent to him. And I think none of the so called gods of all the novels of this word qualify to be called gods. Moreover, I dont hate your story.. I love it.. But when such words are used, I am forced to drop the novel no matter how much I love it. Take Legendary Mechanic as an example.

Muhammad_Usama1:Brother, I am not forcing you to stop. I just wanted to get this thing to get ininto the knowledge of great authors like you who write great srories. You can write whatever you want. It is your life. I just wanted to shed some light on this critical issue. And yours in not the only novel where I posted my one star review. You can check the reviews of "The Legendary Mechanic" "The Monster Paradise" "The Forty Millenniums of Cultivation" and "Rise of the Godking", my most favourite(ex) novels that I dropped just for that. So unfortunate, hahaha. But you can keep writing, it wont effect you a bit except for losing one reader (me of course hahahaha) . Farewell

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Muhammad_Usama1:No you are not. You are someone who eat and shit. .Please dont take this lightly. .Read my rest of the comments. The very word "God" is sacred.

Muhammad_Usama1:This is not a hate comment brother... Yes the world is created by you and is your work of fiction but the very word "God" is very sensitive.. You are attributing human qualities to a God.. The true meaning of God is "Almighty", "Without human needs","Merciful""Gracious","Omnipotent""Omniscient"etc.. And I give you the answer of the usage of divine words becoming common sense... It has become common sense to use words like "God""Godly""Divine""Divinity" because nobody has objected till now and there is no censorship about it.. And these have been used so much that people consider it normal now.Even I myself became conscious about it few months age and dropped all my favourite novels.. Brother, whatever is your religious affiliation, please consider this.We are all answerable to true God someday.. You can create whatever story you want but please avoid using such words whatever the context is.. And thanks for replying to my comment..

065:Isn't god all forgiving?

065:Isn't god all forgiving?

Tsuzuna:What an idiot this one is. Expecting him to go around yelling with explosives stripped to his chest

Muhammad_Usama1:My friend. I don't go around yelling with explosives tied to my chest. But if you want to see me like this to understand what I am trying to say, I am sorry. I should disappoint you for not fullfilling your perverted wish.