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Review Detail of Ahmed_khaled in Born of Darkness: Family reunion.

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Ahmed_khaled
Ahmed_khaledLv32yrAhmed_khaled

I just have one problem with this story writing quality the idea for the story is amazing but reading the story is like torture to my eyes I really hope he improves the writing quality and stops saying every thing twice

altalt

Born of Darkness: Family reunion.

Keyc_moon

Liked it!

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Ahmed_khaled
Ahmed_khaledLv3Ahmed_khaled

it isn't that I don't like the novel it just feels like everything is written twice some good editing would make it top grade

Keyc_moon:I'm glad that you liked the plot of the fan fiction. Of course, it's a pity that you didn't really like the quality of what was written, but this is a translation through programs.
Keyc_moon
Keyc_moonAuthorKeyc_moon

I'm glad that you liked the plot of the fan fiction. Of course, it's a pity that you didn't really like the quality of what was written, but this is a translation through programs.