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Review Detail of PrinceSloth in My Hero Academia: The Undaunted Golem

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PrinceSloth
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Quirk is good. But there is a minus, a huge minus. Why should I read a story where the main character is a mother izuku who cleans everything up after him all the time.

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My Hero Academia: The Undaunted Golem

ArtificerArtillery

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ArtificerArtillery
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I have gotten that before and I believe to have fixed that in later chapters, but didn't change it because this is my first time writing a fanfiction and I want to see the growth in the writing. Please let me know if you have any more feedback back!

HellGod13
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at least appreciate the author manšŸ¤¬šŸ¤¬. You can't write anything do you?šŸ¤¬šŸ¤¬. Just read if you want don't make this novel bad in rating dude

PrinceSloth
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I gave a normal grade. The author simply took the plot from Mha and inserted his character who only does what follows the izuku. And mha does not bring anything new to the world.

HellGod13:at least appreciate the author manšŸ¤¬šŸ¤¬. You can't write anything do you?šŸ¤¬šŸ¤¬. Just read if you want don't make this novel bad in rating dude
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