This is a good story with a slice of life. The main character is quite depressed since the beginning but he is somehow relatable! I look forward to see how the ML life goes on and his love life too😄😄

is this a biography? because if it is, I'm just stunned by the writing and experiences, the reader doesn't get a brief glimpse but an in depth exploration of the MC's struggle with mental health. I'm just stunned, This is metaphorical in a beautiful ways and painful to read too, i wanna see more though! post more !!!! keep me notified

What a story! You give us some wonderful story with excellent analogy. Your had grammatical error in the first chapter but the recent and newest chap is fine. Keep workin and good luck

My first genuine review. I don't know why this story got me hooked up, just read a few chapters and I can't stop reading it maybe I got a thing for drama and stuff, anyways the story is pretty good and I'm loving the suspense it's giving me and its really really really really really great

Wonderful, the first chapter is drag me over to the others. This is just perfect, although there some grammatical error but you get better on the recent chap, the grammar was fine. Keep up! Good luck!

AMAZING!!! I can't even begin to comprehend what I read just over the first chapter!!! It was very engaging and well thought out. It definitely keeps you entertained, and makes you keep your attention on it. You can't forget where you left off, even after reading a bunch of other novels!!! I thought the storyline was very well written and developed as well. I thought the beginning could've been a little more descriptive though, I just didn't understand who this character was at first. I also always recommend checking the grammar, us authors always struggle with this!!! Can't wait to read more, and see how the story develops more later on!!! I would like to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

This is a heartbreaking story. The male character is filled with sadness in the starting chapters that makes one wonder how will he cope up with his problems while not affecting his work. Anyway, the plot is good but the story needs some editing in some paragraphs to make the story better. Overall, it's enjoyable to read. Keep it up author! :)

This is a great story. It's very relatable and I really connected personally with this one. It's realistic but also hopeful and inspiring. (5/5)

I haven't read many novels with slice of life, and so I am very interested. it's a good book. I love the character development and feel sorry that he's going through such hard times. Hope to see more.

The Good: Excellent story with a very strong attention to the emotions attached with loss. The author does a great job of helping the reader feel everything as intended! The paragraph structure is done well so the story flows smoothly without having long paragraphs or short stuttering ones. The Bad: As great as the structure is, the grammar is just... barely passable... Many times tenses get switched within the same sentence accidentally or the wrong verb tense is used period. Punctuation needs a bit of help but that should come with the grammar. While I feel this is a great story, I feel like it is hard to digest with how often I find myself double-backing to reread things due to the grammar mistakes. The Neutral: Overall, excellent work and great story. I feel like you are improving a little with each chapter, but I still think verb tenses are really giving you trouble. Keep at it though and give Grammarly a try if you are still struggling with verb tenses.