Review Detail of HangerBaby in The Overlord Descends

so reall the most off putting thing is the writing. its bad, like 3rd grader bad. just using Grammarly and rereading it would honestly eliminate so many of the problems. and the character design is another issue with them being writen and portrayed in a weird way. i dont really know how to explain it you just have to read it to understand. i wont say dont read it but its not something id recommend