Review Detail of ruhe in The Shinobi of Straw Hats
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It’s stupid, don’t waste your time. the more i read the more he gets nerfed, and why even waste some much time he could been more stronger then he was when he mate aokiji. he even has a mission from rob but shit he finds people other then the 2 giants he becomes a happy little dog, a follower and nothing more. he says he has dreams but wtf is his dream. A beta fiction from a beta writer. So many people kill there fanfic by trying to force there mc which should be the main character into the main cast of the world the he is in and in process making him a secondary character
The Shinobi of Straw Hats
PeekACoo
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Yea, you got the idea. However, I think you've only read the first version. I reworked the story when I finished the first volume. So let's say you pick up from where you stopped chapter 29-32 you'll see some new plots + power system I implemented for MC. In conclusion, you got the main idea for some plots (some plots), however, with the reworked version there's more to it that I added.
ruhe:wasn't it like 2 or 3 chapter latter after he got the fruit he got out and ran away with his roommates ??? into the open see and i was wondering the kingdom that he is enslaved was his home, like from context i got if i remember it there was a hint that he is a son of a king and the royal guards hiding and stuff
all read in library read till he got to dig and discover his blood fruit and waiting to get more chapters to continue read
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Right. So my guess is you enjoyed it so far. Haha, however, I tell you what, you accumulated enough to enjoy some days of reading. There's a lot of plot endings and opening. You've only stopped at around chapter 30-33 (not even reached the climax of Vol 1). Currently, there are 76 chapters + the one I will post after some hours.
ruhe:all read in library read till he got to dig and discover his blood fruit and waiting to get more chapters to continue read
wasn't it like 2 or 3 chapter latter after he got the fruit he got out and ran away with his roommates ??? into the open see and i was wondering the kingdom that he is enslaved was his home, like from context i got if i remember it there was a hint that he is a son of a king and the royal guards hiding and stuff
Vostarian:Right. So my guess is you enjoyed it so far. Haha, however, I tell you what, you accumulated enough to enjoy some days of reading. There's a lot of plot endings and opening. You've only stopped at around chapter 30-33 (not even reached the climax of Vol 1). Currently, there are 76 chapters + the one I will post after some hours.
Vostarian:Right. So my guess is you enjoyed it so far. Haha, however, I tell you what, you accumulated enough to enjoy some days of reading. There's a lot of plot endings and opening. You've only stopped at around chapter 30-33 (not even reached the climax of Vol 1). Currently, there are 76 chapters + the one I will post after some hours.