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Overall nice. Pros -Mc has a good personality. -Mc joining the main characters is a plus for me. Others may not like it, but I enjoyed it that way. There are a lot of op or evil mc fanfic. If this is not for their taste, they can read them. There is no need to bother the author too much and make him drop it. -I like romance but cringe love isn't suit One piece fanfics. So I like his choose of partner. Cons -The author doesn't know about power scale. Sometimes mc looks strong but most of the time he has a hard time against weak opponents. He has 3 tomoe sharingan but never use genjutsu. Frankly, I don't think they can get rid of genjutsu without haki in one piece. Some will say, he doesn't have mangekyou, but 3 tomoe sharingan is more than enough to get someone who doesn't know how to use chakra to genjutsu. He knows more than one s rank ninjutsu but he is still too weak. I think the S rank jutsus at least matching admiral's full force attack. I hate nerfing. If you going to go nerf mc than don't give him that power. I don't mind him being not stronger than luffy but at least make it logical. When he gets mangekyou logicaly he should be at least as strong as strong vice admirals if not stronger but now you make him this weak; he probably end up at most rear admiral level. I hope you fix it.

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