webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of LucasNamikaze in The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Review detail

LucasNamikaze
LucasNamikazeLv13yrLucasNamikaze

I don't think this fanfic is to my liking but I don't think it's bad, the MC's personality is very nice, but I see no reason why the MC is weaker than Luffy simply because he is the captain, not always the strongest person is necessarily the leader of something depends a lot on the person’s charisma and we all know that luffy has plenty, so since he doesn’t want to make the MC stronger than Luffy because he doesn’t make them have the same strength and become a kind of rival friendly, because Zoro is not necessarily weaker than Luffy, nor did he leave the crew for that reason, besides the fact that reading a story that the MC is always behind a person is not for me. Other than that the fanfic is not bad so my 4 star rating.

altalt

The Shinobi of Straw Hats

PeekACoo

Liked by 129 people

LIKE

Replies9

CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv3CasualDegenerate

Its confirmed luffy has plot armor even in fan-fics

ZEN_F
ZEN_FLv3ZEN_F

I think mc weaker than luffy because luffy mc holo...... as we know that mc dont has any memory about one piece anime... so it can being said that he just follow luffy just because he like luffy personality.... and also....mc basicly only 2 years training...meanwhile luffy and zoro trained from child....so it can being said mc weak because lack of time for training.... also mc support system dont really help mc.... as the system only sell skill or item(maybe?)...but i agree that this novel i can only vote 4 star... as mc not very strong as he should be.... It okay if rhe mc not Super op But dont make mc weaker than luffy as its will make the troublem in the latter half of the novel... as in the one piece.... only luffy zoro and sanji has ability to fight with three disaster(jack,queen,king) Sweet general(katakuri,oven,smoothe,prosperos) Whitebeard general (marco,ace,jozu,flower swordman) Akagami pirate( all of them) So even if mc join the strawhead pirate..it will not change the plot to much... as luffy+zoro+sanji+jon has almost similar battle power Maybe this what we call anime balance to avoid the world destroyed..... Well i think author will make mc/jon rapidly became stronger after marineford war arc That all from me

Ultimate_Ciel
Ultimate_CielLv4Ultimate_Ciel

i dont thaink that this was ever mentioned raht he was weaker than tgrm because lugfy is the captain hr litterally trained for 2 years

Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv4Str4ng3r

Nope he's still weak

ZEN_F:I think mc weaker than luffy because luffy mc holo...... as we know that mc dont has any memory about one piece anime... so it can being said that he just follow luffy just because he like luffy personality.... and also....mc basicly only 2 years training...meanwhile luffy and zoro trained from child....so it can being said mc weak because lack of time for training.... also mc support system dont really help mc.... as the system only sell skill or item(maybe?)...but i agree that this novel i can only vote 4 star... as mc not very strong as he should be.... It okay if rhe mc not Super op But dont make mc weaker than luffy as its will make the troublem in the latter half of the novel... as in the one piece.... only luffy zoro and sanji has ability to fight with three disaster(jack,queen,king) Sweet general(katakuri,oven,smoothe,prosperos) Whitebeard general (marco,ace,jozu,flower swordman) Akagami pirate( all of them) So even if mc join the strawhead pirate..it will not change the plot to much... as luffy+zoro+sanji+jon has almost similar battle power Maybe this what we call anime balance to avoid the world destroyed..... Well i think author will make mc/jon rapidly became stronger after marineford war arc That all from me
18484746
18484746Lv418484746

Is just that the grammar is so dam bad

John_Zambrano
John_ZambranoLv4John_Zambrano

[img=coins][img=coins]

ARandomOtaku_
ARandomOtaku_Lv14ARandomOtaku_

English?

Ultimate_Ciel:i dont thaink that this was ever mentioned raht he was weaker than tgrm because lugfy is the captain hr litterally trained for 2 years
Slife_Game
Slife_GameLv1Slife_Game

he gets stronger /equal after 2 year time skip

Nightmare_deity
Nightmare_deityLv3Nightmare_deity

It look more like luffy story than the MC MC is just the side story