Honestly this is probably perfect in my opinion. Some people may hate that he's weaker than Luffy but I'm really happy this is the case or he has no reason to be following his captain. He's strong but not overly so, as well as having the potential to surpass everyone. This premise I like. And from the charecter of the MC, it's also not bad. Although there could be a few things that's not to my taste, it's still a likable MC. I find that 80% of the fanfics I read have shitty personality so I'm relieved. I'm really looking forward to this so don't drop and carry on! đ
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LIKEscoots:He doesnât have the potential to surpass Luffy so this is bs
MediocreSkater:He literally said that the peak powers in Naruto is stronger than one piece.
If you mean for this story sure,(it's fanfiction and the author could write as he please) but if we try to compare the canon of these 2 universes it is highly debatable.
Gang_Capone:Not at the moment
The peak powers in naruto stronger than one piece is because all the bloodline bullshit. As far as i know the only one without that is only Guy.
MediocreSkater:He literally said that the peak powers in Naruto is stronger than one piece.
It's definitely worth it imo. The strength of the MC grows with the crew. It's around the strength of Zoro maybe better and around the same as Luffy. Though at the end MC would probably be the strongest due to his potential.
Edgelord69:Is this story woth reading? I mean why can't he get stronger than luffy? I read stories hoping the MCs will get to the top, except for some genre.
I would accept a mc weaker than luffy if he did not have any system or cheat. But in this case no, he has a system and multiple ninja world abilities at his disposal, so there is no point in him being weaker. And if a MC joins the Straw Hats just to follow the plot, then this is not a fanfic but an insult to the original work. I read a story where the MC had a bleach system, he joined Luffy and in the end he didn't change anything, he even let Ace die. So I'm sick of this kind of story. (Google translate)
MediocreSkater:It's definitely worth it imo. The strength of the MC grows with the crew. It's around the strength of Zoro maybe better and around the same as Luffy. Though at the end MC would probably be the strongest due to his potential.
Thats basically every fanfiction though. They want to get to the top. Its a nice change of pace to at least have different goals.
Edgelord69:Is this story woth reading? I mean why can't he get stronger than luffy? I read stories hoping the MCs will get to the top, except for some genre.
eclairsshi:The peak powers in naruto stronger than one piece is because all the bloodline bullshit. As far as i know the only one without that is only Guy.
Izanmi:I would accept a mc weaker than luffy if he did not have any system or cheat. But in this case no, he has a system and multiple ninja world abilities at his disposal, so there is no point in him being weaker. And if a MC joins the Straw Hats just to follow the plot, then this is not a fanfic but an insult to the original work. I read a story where the MC had a bleach system, he joined Luffy and in the end he didn't change anything, he even let Ace die. So I'm sick of this kind of story. (Google translate)
Bruh but Aces death was important though, it impacts the whole post time skip, and also the MC isnât a fanboy if he lost all his memories about one piece, this is just a peaceful fanfic of an mc in a crew traveling and fighting with his friends, yes he doesnât impact the whole one piece a lot doesnât mean the storyâs bad
Izanmi:I would accept a mc weaker than luffy if he did not have any system or cheat. But in this case no, he has a system and multiple ninja world abilities at his disposal, so there is no point in him being weaker. And if a MC joins the Straw Hats just to follow the plot, then this is not a fanfic but an insult to the original work. I read a story where the MC had a bleach system, he joined Luffy and in the end he didn't change anything, he even let Ace die. So I'm sick of this kind of story. (Google translate)
What you mean is that even if a mc joins Luffy's crew and there is any chance of saving Ace (his captain's sworn brother, whom Luffy wants to save even risking his own life) it's better to let him die because Is his death important to the story? ..... Ok ..... And please, a mc without memories about the plot is not an excuse to practically copy the original story. It is better to read the manga again than to read this 'fanfic'. (Google translate)
ILoveSimping:Bruh but Aces death was important though, it impacts the whole post time skip, and also the MC isnât a fanboy if he lost all his memories about one piece, this is just a peaceful fanfic of an mc in a crew traveling and fighting with his friends, yes he doesnât impact the whole one piece a lot doesnât mean the storyâs bad