Item: Dormica
Rating: 4.8
Author: you_li_er

you_li_erLv123yr

2021-01-23 06:25

A solid 4.8 for me. The writing quality is actually really good, the only thing is the grammatical mistakes that occur every once in a while. The way the ideas are conveyed through the sentences is actually very effective. It's intriguing, the characters are interesting (MC), and the world background along with the main plot and development are both great. I just hope that the author won't give up and keep posting!

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