I can really feel the suspense building in this story as a I read! There are some problems with basic conventions that make this story a little tricky to read (especially in regard to quotations because us readers don't know who's speaking) but it's not like irredeemably horrible. On a brighter note, the plot is pretty interesting!! Keep up the good work author ^u^
Y.R. Novella
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