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Michael_Gesellchen
Michael_GesellchenLv23yr
2021-01-14 00:31

This author does a great job building this story. The setting and characters are written with vivid description and detail. The plot is intriguing and well paced. Can’t wait for more. I’m a fan! [img=recommend]

Before Sunrise

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4.8
14 Chs

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Afolabi_Mubarak
Afolabi_MubarakLv2

Beautiful work of art. The narration is so engaging, it gets your attention from the beginning to the last page, the characters are so well written and depicted, they start to feel real, and the diction is excellent. Kudos to the author.

3yr

auroar2314
auroar2314Lv2

I feel like this story would be a very interesting and fun one to read... it's already rest interesting... I can't wait to read more of this... the author has done an amazing job in developing the characters and their descriptions...

3yr
Jacket_Josh
Jacket_JoshLv1

Very interesting so far! The cast seems to be really realistic and down to earth, and the plot from the first few chapters is pretty well setup and interesting! Great work on the part of the author.

3yr
Lottie_Cnozy
Lottie_CnozyLv2

Hey, your fellow author here! You did a good job on the synopsis. It's short and simple, just the right amount of information on the story that keeps the readers wanting more. The last sentence was really intriguing. I've only read a few chapters and I can see that you have a wide range of vocabulary. It did well to describe the situation and the characters. The sentence structure is a little weird though it may only be my issue. It's a little difficult to understand for me. It could also be because of Ella's peculiar relationship with her family and everybody else. The mystery behind Ella's past has me on the edge on my seat to read on. I'd say, this is a good read. Very mysterious. Keep up the good work!

3yr
Daoistu1OBcg
Daoistu1OBcgLv1

The author has well thought and well written the dialog and the phasing is on point. But for a reader's point of view I was already tempted to skip chapter three and moved to chapter five.

3yr
Candy_Bajuyo
Candy_BajuyoLv1

Literally a page turner, I became engrossed all of sudden. Tho I spotted a few errors tho it's well written. Kudos to you writer! Keep writing!

3yr
soul_writer
soul_writerLv1

Even though I’ve only got to the ending of the first chapter I can already see what a mystery the story will become. what a fun read! Good job author!

3yr
Olaoluwa_Adepoju_6214
Olaoluwa_Adepoju_6214Lv1

am amazed by the story line i must say good job to the author for this wonderful amazing piece really a great and mavelous one good job author

3yr
Linden_Nkabinde
Linden_NkabindeLv1

A great read that's well plotted and written, author did a great job with introducing and describing her characters. Story is flowing and draws one to read for more. Good job Author keep it up.

3yr
Dugzaw
DugzawLv1

You write so well that it is easy for a reader to just get hooked by your synopsis. You have great detail and description in the summary, giving the reader enough backstory before they start. I love how you develop your story and the descriptions within the chapters. I am a fan. Keep up the good work.

3yr
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