Review Detail of vinthakadha in My love Is my cure

A lot of editing is needed in the following: a) grammar - more work is suggested in punctuation, capitalisation and use of tenses. b) character introduction - a little more description of character is suggested viz, physical features, thoughts etc. c) background - both world and characters - it is very difficult to know where the story is happening. Vague description of a house as huge doesn't work much for the reader as it is very difficult to imagine the kind of house the author is trying to describe. I suggest more research on the background. The plot looks good but the story sounds like a rough draft rather than a fair copy. Having said that, I feel the story could be a lot better and gripping if it is edited properly. All the best for the author.