Item: Naruto Dimensional System
Rating: 3.4
Author: Duke_Night_Hawk

Duke_Night_HawkLv143yr

2021-05-30 05:46

Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.

Naruto Dimensional System

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3.3

365 Chs

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