Okay so here I go. First I love the beginning of the story. Specially since it's about space, galaxy and I don't want to take a step ahead of the authors idea but I'm going to assume that one of the protagonist is an alien. I'm just smiling as I read every chapter. I'm a sucker for space related stories! And I love how well written this is. The way of the author's writing is taking me to another world. Beautifully written. This should have more views than it has. Now to the few mistakes. As I've seen there are few very very minimal distracting parts like words having the symbol* between them. But other than that it's a good read even though the story is just beginning. Will be tuning in for more!
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LIKEjEONGjEONG:I see. I'll edit it and make a run to it once more. Thank you for your notes!
Hello! I'm sorry if I haven't been reviewing your book. Unfortunately, our exams are just a week away and I still don't get some of our lessons specifically math huhu. I'll update as soon as I updated my chapter and review your book again. Looking forward to reviewing and reading your book especially the celestial one. That's really lit! :)))
KamiKrimson:Thanks. I'm still waiting for your review on my book. 😁😁😁😁
Ohhhh I understand. I'm sorry hahahaha I did not know you were a student! I hope you pass your exams!
jEONGjEONG:Hello! I'm sorry if I haven't been reviewing your book. Unfortunately, our exams are just a week away and I still don't get some of our lessons specifically math huhu. I'll update as soon as I updated my chapter and review your book again. Looking forward to reviewing and reading your book especially the celestial one. That's really lit! :)))