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Sigheti
SighetiLv43yrSigheti

A charming work with a promising premise and characters that come together to form an overall entertaining story. While I must confess that I did not, at first, find myself very sympathetic to the protagonist, she grew on me as the story unfolded. The writing is very clear and clean, making it an easy, relaxing read.

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Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?

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mozza_mello
mozza_melloAuthormozza_mello

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it hehe! <3 I've also read your story, and honestly, you're really good at writing! :D Do tell me if you've got any criticism hehe, thank you again! Have a great dayyy

Sigheti
SighetiLv4Sigheti

Not really. My personal preference is a little more descriptive, but I think the current rhythm suits your story very well, so I wouldn’t throw it around too much. There’s a certain charm in the easy and clear style you deploy, and I don’t know whether you would do your story any favours where you to start using overly floral descritions.