Over all the quality of writing is mediocre, good compared to other novels on this sight. The writing is easily understandable and rarely is there a part where I have to read it more than once. Story development is not so good, so far I'm 17 chapters in and see no indication of where the story is heading and what type of novel its gonna be, other than it seems like the typical weak to strong. The novel is set in a very interesting world, which I would love to read more of, especially how the power levels work. Unfortunately I will be dropping this novel, why? it's ridiculous - no effort has been put in to create any type of unique character and the author forgets that a 4 - 6 year old child IS A CHILD. In 3 chapters, the mc (a 6 year old child by this point) is allowed by all members of his family to go to the same war his father - the fastest sword man - was seriously injured in and still hasn't recovered from, then when his parents have left him at his grandparents (his father ran off to the war without him and his mother is selling her body to a man that could heal her husband) his aunt and grandparents guilt trip him into going to the war to rescue his father. And then after all that, it is stated that he cannot carry too much because he is a child. And this is just the tip of the iceberg. The rest of the characters can be summarised in a sentence each. The parents are typical strong isekai parents who have settled down to have a child, the aunt dotes on the mc a lot and will find any excuse to hug him, and the grandparents don't even have any character, there's literally nothing i can say about them, any unique qualities about the grandparents? nope, the most unique thing is that the grandmother lets off a scary gaze. these characters can almost be found in any other medieval isekai novel. I apologise if I've gotten anything wrong as I have only read the first 17 chapters. But in my defence the beginning chapters are the most important as they are supposed to entice the reader, and in my opinion the first 17 chapters have failed to do just that.
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it's a good review, I like it because you've really read until you reached the end of the first arc
