To tell you honestly, I don't know how to review your story hahaha XD. Due to the fact that I dont read tagalog stories anymore which makes me more confused on how to critic them. Sorry about that. Tagalog is my 3rd language (1st Cebuano, 2nd English). But I can see how nice and awesome your story is. (Sorry for the pathetic me who almost crush my brains off because some tagalog words are too deep for my feeble mind to comprehend) If you can provide an english translation with the same content and descriptions that would be awesome! I'm sure many people will like your story. Great job author! Keep up the good work!
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