Review Detail of Astral_Void in The Novel's Extra's Extra

It's overall Good so far and hope it remains that way Although the cursing is a bit above normal, its ignorable and after reading story up to the current point, I am getting used to all the cursing from the MC. Background is interesting like how the MC has travelled to other worlds and stuff. Character designs are Good. Story development is Nice but the character development is a bit slow, but its ignorable. Writing Quality is good. Although there are some grammar mistakes, its not so much that it becomes hard to read, only at some points in the Novel so far, so compared to the other novels, its still to the minimum. Updates are a Bit slow now, but its understandable considering the length of each chapter. Although I do hope that the update frequency fastens a bit. Overall, the only thing I want more is the character development, Also hoping for Rachel to meet Evandal soon, it'd be even better if the Relationship betweem Cristopher and Rachel gets a boost a little sooner. Overall, I'd want to give it a 5- star, but since as said, the updates are a but slow now, so it'd be a 4.8 stars for Now. Though I can always change that if it gets better Keep up the good work, and hope you're safe. Thanks for reading the review, have a good day!