Review Detail of ILoveSimping in Reborn as a celestial in marvel

This novel is an eh, it’s pretty bland and doesn’t have anything that is impactful to me, the grammar is also really bad, there are a lot of spelling errors and if this keeps on happening then the author needs an editor. Some of you might complain to me because I’m criticizing the author way too hard because of just spelling mistakes and how the author is 14, so let me say some things, if the author doesn’t change the spelling mistakes and actually gets better in English then it’s going to be unreadable to a lot of people, some people need to understand what’s actually going on in this book. And about the thing for the author being 14, that doesn’t matter, I’m 13 and english isn’t also my mother tongue, and I’m able to write and speak fluently in English, I get one or two mistakes here or there in some chapters and I learn from that, but this author spells “progenitor” in three different ways which makes it seem like he doesn’t bother with the spelling, I don’t care if you think I’m criticizing him too hard, but this is a review section, I have the right to criticize him, because criticism what makes people learn from their mistakes, it may damage his spirit a little but he should at least look forward and learn from his mistakes that he is doing in each and every chapter.