Review Detail of UndeadProgenitor in Reborn as a celestial in marvel

I think this ff deserves an even lower rating. I gave a 3 because there isnt many celestail mcs or ff. The author doenst seem to know how to spell Some things. In the first 3 chapters the word “progenitor” has been written at least 3 different ways in every chapter. It also seems like the author doesn’t know where to put comma in numbers this is loterally what i saw “700,0000” i didn’t know this number even existed. Well i didnt come here just to criticize and not go to the point. Author you need an editor or just use grammarly.