Long lines ( no space ) , Xianxia cultivation - they use this shitty way of speaking, no good context, retarded Mc which doesn't use the time in a proper way , non logical situations. Poor quality story, horrible MC and the worst of all would be chinese cultivation talk. ... is the most cancerous way of speaking, IT'S NOT HOW NORMAL PEOPLE SPEAK!

I think this ff deserves an even lower rating. I gave a 3 because there isnt many celestail mcs or ff. The author doenst seem to know how to spell Some things. In the first 3 chapters the word “progenitor” has been written at least 3 different ways in every chapter. It also seems like the author doesn’t know where to put comma in numbers this is loterally what i saw “700,0000” i didn’t know this number even existed. Well i didnt come here just to criticize and not go to the point. Author you need an editor or just use grammarly.

it is a very poor quality novel ... my eyes hurt when i read it ..contufisicaytuquimicatambientuanatomialacervezayeltequilaytubocaconlamiayanopuedomayanopuedomayanopuedomaaa

Others with the same rating have pretty much explained all there is that's wrong with the story. I will just add to that by saying the author chose the wrong race for the mc. He was made a celestial and we all know how strong they are. But the mc nerf's him and doesn't use that strength, along with the mc being very stupid. If that makes sense? He says in the comments that he does it because he doesn't want the mc to be too strong and that it won't be very fun if he is godlike. Like are you mad? He is a celestial, he is a god.

nice this is really good only thing you need to do is get better with grammar.

Writing quality 2* : It feels like it is written like how a chinese novel is written only with worse grammer. Stability of updates 2* : There is no stability of updates as they are randomly posted, 2* are given because the time between chapters isn't very long. (There are a dozen or so chapters that is just spam that add nothing to the story which makes the rating drop.) Stroy development 1* : It is all over the place and the bad grammer doesn't make it easier to follow, the story premise itself is okay. (The author said he didn't want his main character to be too OP but that's just bullshit as the main character is very OP, immortal/time control/creating life are just few of the main characters abilities) Character Design 1* : Due to the way the author writes it feels as if the characters are robots who are given pre-uploaded personalities. World background 3* : I gave 3* because it's marvel but nothing else particularly stood out to me that the author added himself that improved an already existing story. Total score : 1.8 My review may be harsh even though I liked reading it as everything that has something to do with marvel exites me, it's just very badly executed. I hope you improve your writing capabilities along the way. (This is in no way to discurage the author for writing.)

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it went to fast for my tastes, I couldn't get a grip of what was going on without reading it more than once, and with me that is saying something, I love your concept, but you just executed it wrong. Try to rewrite it, I am just stating my opinion

This novel is an eh, it’s pretty bland and doesn’t have anything that is impactful to me, the grammar is also really bad, there are a lot of spelling errors and if this keeps on happening then the author needs an editor. Some of you might complain to me because I’m criticizing the author way too hard because of just spelling mistakes and how the author is 14, so let me say some things, if the author doesn’t change the spelling mistakes and actually gets better in English then it’s going to be unreadable to a lot of people, some people need to understand what’s actually going on in this book. And about the thing for the author being 14, that doesn’t matter, I’m 13 and english isn’t also my mother tongue, and I’m able to write and speak fluently in English, I get one or two mistakes here or there in some chapters and I learn from that, but this author spells “progenitor” in three different ways which makes it seem like he doesn’t bother with the spelling, I don’t care if you think I’m criticizing him too hard, but this is a review section, I have the right to criticize him, because criticism what makes people learn from their mistakes, it may damage his spirit a little but he should at least look forward and learn from his mistakes that he is doing in each and every chapter.

Some of you guys need to chill the author is only 14, imagine the things he has to do ontop of writing this fanfic and ignoring grown people hating on him just for his bad grammar, because from reading recent chapter its obvious hes trying his best and improving. A kid shoulndt get so much hate from a few chapter back, to a point where he deletes and entire chapter and re writes it so that people dont continue to insult and hate on him. This fanfic is truly amazing and if you cant handle a few grammar errors you should grow up because hes just a kid