Review Detail of Jake_Makvana in Kei's Adventures In Multiverse: Saving Damsels in Distress

Some suggestions for author Give MC time related ability so that he can prevent some tragedies like the tragedy that happened in school, by doing this u can build a good story with not much sore feelings. And MC have revival ability right? So please revive all those wifus(like kiana's mother, kallen, yae's sister and many more ) and include them in to harem I don't care if it is netori or not this fan fiction everything goes. And let mc create a mini world inside his body so that he can let all the wifus to live there in peace cause they suffered enough and deserve happiness so let let our MC take that place to give them happiness that they deserve I don't know how but please make it happen. This is FIRST fan fiction of HONKAI I have read I'm hoping some great things from this please don't drop this.