Item: Reborn as a goddess in mha (Dropped)
Rating: 3
Author: OogaChooga

OogaChoogaLv22yr

2023-01-24 08:15

The plot is good but the Grammer is rough. Lots of run on sentences. I didn't really understand the wish of overwriting your own personality with someone else's. Also I may have missed it but I don't think there really was any reason for the gods to reincarnate him, like maybe some karma but like they said he didn't actually end up doing that. Also she didn't really justify her powers as a quirk very well at all. As far as they know it's just the byakugan but now she can transform into a snake and do magic from every element. Doesn't make sense from MHAs science perspective Anyways I like the premise and the fact that she got adopted into Jiro's family was neat.

Reborn as a goddess in mha (Dropped)

Shira_ori

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Shira_oriAuthor

it wasn’t just the byakugan it was all of Kaguya abilities including ten tails form, I’ll be re-writing this hopefully soon.

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