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Review Detail of Deathlock in Otherworld Pervert in DXD

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Deathlock
DeathlockLv33yrDeathlock

Just stop it already . l cannot say for others but for me it had crossed the line. --------------------------------------------------------

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Otherworld Pervert in DXD

Evil_Peppa

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Sulov_Adhikari
Sulov_AdhikariLv13Sulov_Adhikari

that is not even a review. There isn't any criticism and seems like pure hate. So you have all rights to delete his review.

Evil_Peppa:What? I'm not forcing anyone to read this. I don't need your validation to write what I want children. My grammar sucks but please? Stop writing? I accept critique against the sentence structure, plotholes and my english. I don't know you so stop commanding me like you own my life. I already put parental consent in this story and there's R-18 in the tag. I'm trying my hardest to write for free, like wtf? Who are you to dictate what things to do? Just read what do you like and fvck off, you just didn't like the theme so you want me to stop?. You're the one who cross the line for making me stop writing. I don't need kids like you to read my pitiful novel:) I'm not even recommending this to someone like you who is crybaby just by reading a text. I don't want to argue with anyone but you really make me mad. I love writing and I don't care about you, I don't even know you so please just read another novel.
Evil_Peppa
Evil_PeppaAuthorEvil_Peppa

What? I'm not forcing anyone to read this. I don't need your validation to write what I want children. My grammar sucks but please? Stop writing? I accept critique against the sentence structure, plotholes and my english. I don't know you so stop commanding me like you own my life. I already put parental consent in this story and there's R-18 in the tag. I'm trying my hardest to write for free, like wtf? Who are you to dictate what things to do? Just read what do you like and fvck off, you just didn't like the theme so you want me to stop?. You're the one who cross the line for making me stop writing. I don't need kids like you to read my pitiful novel:) I'm not even recommending this to someone like you who is crybaby just by reading a text. I don't want to argue with anyone but you really make me mad. I love writing and I don't care about you, I don't even know you so please just read another novel.

Omega_Slayer
Omega_SlayerLv1Omega_Slayer

Dude that's just rude to the author. If you're uncomfortable with this kind of thing then don't read it in the first place. The Author's warning in the synopsis is there for a reason. Don't post a bad review just because there are things you don't like in the fanfic.