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mikiko_min
mikiko_minLv13yr
2021-02-09 21:39

so as I was reading the first part of the story , literally I didn't knew what will happen next, though I may say that is a good sign that ur story is interesting and isn't boring like other stories . I like that the mc was related lol , the mc was so scared and it was really fun to see the mc 's reactions , I want to acknowledge that the details of the mc's reaction was on point. Overall the plot was really nice , as a reader I like to theorize what will happen next and again idk what to say , it really was unexpectable to the point that I get really nervous and worried about the mc ( which is good since readers should also feel like they are in that scene . Just keep the story flow going smoothly k. And I would like to recommend that u make a synopsis , I mean attest the background so readers would tackle ur story ( since slot of readers base on the synopsis) Heyy it's me mik², lol ur so professional and really brave to post works in English, lol hope ur brain cells still work after this. But to be frank I'm here to support all the way. Sorry for posting my review a bit late, honestly I was really having trouble with my time management and I just remembered my mission to give u a review HAHAHHAHAH GOODLUCKKK YUI [img=update][img=recommend]

Lost: Through the Border

Yui_Kei
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14 Chs

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Yui_Kei
Yui_KeiAuthor

Thank you~! Yeah, I should've taken care of that synopsis. And my brain cells are still... Okay(?) Knowing my English (Everything about how BAD I am in English)... Thank you for your concern. Please continue to support me...

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Ritankar_Sarkar_
Ritankar_Sarkar_Lv11

The world, the author has created- Creates a strange feeling of attachment, if seen from a reader's veiwpoint. But, it's clear that the writing style needs some trimmings which can be easily improved. But, it's fine as who doesn't has mistakes within Webnovel? Overall- Thats a good story to read. I Hope the work gets the attention it deserves!

4yr

Novelcat_Wind
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hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.

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Aby_jsbbs56
Aby_jsbbs56Lv2

Ohooo. The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Keep up the good work I'll be waiting for your next update.

4yr
Ana_musings
Ana_musingsLv10

The cover design is interesting. The synopsis could be a bit longer for readers who don't take time to invest in newbie authors. But woah, the chapters do make up for the synopsis with the MC getting kidnapped. My only suggestion is to add more details to the synopsis.

3yr
GenXPrays
GenXPraysLv3

In the synopsis: What's going on? And the story presents a very descriptive sequence of incidents, echoing the question... Intrigue, suspense... To read, with great attention

3yr
HarpGrand
HarpGrandLv11

Hi author-nim! What's this? What's this?! I felt like I was the MC! I feel like i was the one being kidnapped and dragged to a place where help is nowhere to be found! Made me feel like I have to learn the basic self-defense to survive if this happened to me. Writing can still be improved but it's very minor. The story is really catchy!

3yr
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