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_AiRen_
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2021-01-12 18:30

[RECOMMEND] I don't know how to communicate! I feel so blown away 🤣 A suggestion author include emoticons, your work would then b perfection. I'm an Author, I know but as a reader before that I would be spending time hooked up with yours! People read this intriguing plot, you might as well b prepared so as not to die from laughing too hard! About the novel- A first person narrative, unique portryal, well constructed world back ground, character ( protagonist) has a humble PERSONALITY (note the sarcasm), intricately tailored plotline with enticing concept. To the Author- I'm going to go for your other books for sure! keep writing well 👍

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TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalAuthor

Thank you so much. I am humbled to receive your positive review of this novel, and I wish you the best for your own writing journey.

_AiRen_
_AiRen_Lv10

TaintedMetal:Thank you so much. I am humbled to receive your positive review of this novel, and I wish you the best for your own writing journey.
_AiRen_
_AiRen_Lv10

can I get a review back on my one please 🥺

TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalAuthor

Hello. I'm sorry for not replying as soon as you commented. I just saw this comment and I have been busy with my projects and other IRL stuff. I have already read yours before, but it seems when I first gave a review, looks like my connection was faulty enough not to send it. Will write a new review ASAP.

_AiRen_:can I get a review back on my one please 🥺
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Swift_Hands
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When I picked up this book, Swift Hand never believed that Dystopia Theme could be excellent. Yes, it is. But in the Webnovel site, where the majority of the trending novels were dominated by Eastern Fantasy, Fantasy, Contemporary Romance, and Magical Realism, I don’t think so. That was until I met this book, though. To organize my thoughts carefully, I’m gonna chronically write it starting from Writing Quality. Note, Swift Hands is not an English Native, as a long-time reader, but I can spot some errors and grammatical mistakes, though it doesn’t feel so glaring and obvious. The grammar is definitely a 4.8/5 for me. Update Stability — As the latest chapter, I can see the Author is constantly updating daily chapters, so 5/5 for me. Story Development — Since the story is still the exposition, I can’t rate the story development yet. But I can see the central idea of the story is pretty interesting. Character Design — As said earlier, the story is still early stage so I can’t rate it. But from what I’ve seen currently, the protagonist seems okay to me. World Background — Earlier chapters, Author really take the time to give us the necessary information for a Dystopia Theme. I totally okay with it and I like it. To the smaller details and bigger details, Author doesn’t overwrite or underwrite explanation, though sometimes it did. Anyway, the World Background is definitely something I’ll be interested in so 5/5 Overall, Story seems legit. Supporting the Author. Goodluck 👍

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