Review Detail of Lucianna_Randall in Desolate World

This story is well thought out and has a good plot line. It's a very engaging post apocalyptic world that is going to go through another one. This story follows a family man as he avails himself of the opportunity contained in a 'game' while creating something that will last after they've left. Give this a try, you won't regret it. Something that the author could improve on is grammar. It's not bad enough to adversely affect reading comprehension, but the mistakes do stick out.