Review Detail of Tariplar in Desolate World

I've really enjoyed this so far. I appreciate the way the author allows the characters to be independent entities and not just an outlet for a power-fantasy. (*cough* Aeternabilis *cough*) The writing quality is good, and the story is developing at a nice pace. Also, it's possible to separate the author's inner voice from that of the main character. Keep it up, you've got a great story!