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NeetMc
NeetMcLv43yr
2021-02-24 21:21

I love your work 10/10 I like the concept, mC is a bit dumb sometimes but human error i understand, storyline is good and the opness of the character is just right, Pacing is alright as well buT a faster pace of 30% more Will be apprIciAted, just keep being you! Cant wait for more!

Ghidorah to anime Multiverse

Bad_Totodile
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Bad_Totodile
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Thank you

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First and foremost, your writing needs and can be improved. I decided to read this today due to the summary I've read and the Rating. I quickly became disappointed. I could barely finish a few chapters before I had to stop. It wasn't enjoyable reading due to your way of writing. To me, it looks like Machine Translation. I don't know if English is your primary language. If it is... I recommend you read what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved before publishing a chapter. If English is not your primary language, you have enough skill with the English language to create a story that can be understood. However, that skill can be vastly improved. Rereading what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved will help increase your skill with the English language regardless of whether the English language is your primary language or not. I know this from experience. That is all.

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Clover_Heart
Clover_HeartLv1

This is the fanfic that I am looking for. Very hidden huh, Cultivation and Pokemon games, I played pokemon saphirre so I can relate of this.. and this lit not in the series or pokemon worrld. How niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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UndeadSage
UndeadSageLv5

IN A NUT: MC re;inced in a runaway trash young master who couldn't handle being born in a family with extraordinary siblings... REVIEW: In a place filled with fanfics of declining quality, this is truly a hidden gem... wouldn't have read it if I wasn't bored... Thanks for your hardwork and pls don't drop....

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YourShadowsenpai
YourShadowsenpaiLv14

I’m very interested in how the story is going to play out. Not only that i like how u apply pokemons in this world.👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

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BobOfSomething
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To be honest I just don't like the pov of this fic, however I do have to say is that this is a good fic. I hop you can continue, but I will be dropping this from library.

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Zombie
ZombieLv10

A work worthy of The Unnamed God Sect! Crazy! Senseless! Exaggerated! References everywhere! Emojis! Lord Zombie himself is here to stamp his seal of approval on that! Brother Senju Sesshomaru keep it up! ( •̀‿• ́)ﻭ✧

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dragoon09
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man why do you to kill seviper??:((((((((((((((((((((((((wuwuwuwueuwuwuwuwuwuwwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuw[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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MASTERT00N
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good work its a good novel worth reading i hope you have 1000+ collections some day and 10000+ review good luck and work hard i will support you.

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