Review Detail of Decree_Woods in Gluttony and vore

For just only two chapters it is really intriguing. I can't take my eyes off of it and I really want to know more. I love how you use very expressive words to describe certain scenarios. Though at the beginning I was quite lost. You didn't properly portrayed the World background. We readers don't even know what those numbers represent. To make your story longer I advised you to be very descriptive about certain topics. Like what are daredevil and traitors you need to write a statement regarding it, that's one thing that made me confused as I don't know what daredevil or traitors stand on your book.Anyway it can make your story longer as you describe certain system in your work. Your grammar is great enough and your writing is great. With more modification and longer chapters your story can be a hit. Waiting for more chapters! Keep up the good work Author!! [img=update][img=recommend]