Review Detail of RichanRyunathal in The Destruction Of Balance

Honest Review# Cons : -Soo, first, the main character introduction is a bit meh for me, you need to increase the introduction from the MC so we can know what kind of dude is the MC. -Second, your writing need a bit improvement IMO, you need to decrease some words in each paragraph, because it makes your reader more comfortable reading it, and make sure if you want to go to dialogue, better make new paragraph. -Third, the story development a bit too fast i think? Pros : -By far, Original theme, except a bit edgy MC, but good background story, you need to widen the background too, the origin of those monsters. -Good description on how MC felt, maybe a little polished will be more great Hey, you can still improve tho, have fun writing