This story is info dump after info dump, there are like three or four lines of story per chapter and the rest is information about weapons/tech/races/etc. There is literally no character development so far, the grammar's okayish and the update stability is pretty good though, you should probably write your information chapters separately from the story so that you don't interrupt the flow.
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