I haven't read much yet but I liked it and it caught my attention. Stories with non-human characters tend not to be very good or are lost when the character magically gains a humanoid body and forgets it was an animal, I don't know if it will end like this, but I have high hopes that it will be good. I liked the way of writing, there are no apparent errors and it was easy to understand the message. The development of world and character is too early to think about it, I have nothing to complain about now but it doesn't have much to evaluate The only defect I would say is a postage rate not yet defined, but this is not really an outrageous defect. In short, I liked this beginning, I have great expectations for the story
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