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OO7TiTAN
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At start it was fairly good with things going fast paced and it seemed to fit with the story too and as you progress later on it gets slow...not that i dont mind but the only thing i dont like are the short chapters...they are too freaking short...its like you read a few paras and its already over...You cant really immerse yourself into it unless you binge it from the start...but if you wait for new chapters daily and read what you get...it just doesnt deliver as much and is not giving that satisfaction and hype you want or what the previous chapters makes you feel...Thats just me...but all i want are lengthier chapters with no BS fillers but actual story and progress..for now the story doesnt have any fillers in it just to make word count..just the story progression but that makes you desire for more and sometimes it causes a negative impact if its executed like that on every chapter you get. Author if you are reading this please make your chapters longer. i dont mind the action or story or pace with how its going just increase the length of the chapters so that it doesnt feel like im reading 2or 3 paras..a chapter should take a few minutes to finish but the ones you are writing hardly takes like 1min:30sec-2mins..

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Lordfifth14372
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yes I agree, story slowed down considerably after 100 chpaters, chapters are short and pacing so slow, even if you skip 10 chapters you won't a miss a thing