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2021-06-25 11:53

writing quality (3)- there are some typos here and there. Some grammars are not right. Some words in a sentence are not appropriate in that sentence. story development (4)- I like revenge type story so yeah I like it but I don't know if he has another goal because if so it would be great but for now the revenge thingy is the only thing is see. Character design (3)- I did not see a single development in character but I think his character is already shaped in his previous world. Updating stAbility (4)- good, I binge this so yeah. World background (4)- meh some new things added and it's a SI I think. or AU? overall-3.6 I like it

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