Ok, let's get started, my opinion as a 17-year-old, ******* writer: 1. Was I hooked? First, let me clarify something, I came into this novel blind, I don't usually read romantic **** stories like this so I won't be comparing it to anything else. Yes, it did hook me. Why? Because to me, it's a brand new concept, but I am aware that this sort of romance is a common type of novel. "Weak-to-Strong", at least in my eyes, does nothing special, but it has interesting (probably overused) subjects in my eyes. 2. What I liked/disliked: I liked the simple and easy-to-follow style; it is beneficial because I can tell you struggle with grammar (maybe English isn't your first language; just like for me), and otherwise, it would be hard to read this and understand what exactly is going on. So yeah, as you can imagine, what I disliked is the poor grammar, countless spelling mistakes, and lack of time dedicated to perfecting each line. 3. Would I continue reading? Bluntly, no. I'm looking for fiction that can help me improve my writing and give me inspiration. This novel appears to be written for the casual readers that want more of this genre, and don't mind the quality. Overall, I believe your novel has a specific audience and you should work on catering it to that audience, which you seemed to have done perfectly from the parts I read. I would definitely advise you to read other, advanced, and highly rated works similar to this so that you can perhaps improve your grammar and sometimes get inspiration if you are ever lacking it. Also, yes, the grammar in this review is off, I'm aware of it. It's ironic that I'm criticizing their grammar, but I believe this is only to help them improve.
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More than just a romantic novel... It's a novel that focuses on a woman's development, and being in love is just a part of development... It's true that hybrids do not exist in our real world, yet Elisabeth does. She is a picture of a woman who's being judged by everyone around for being weak, which caused her to hate herself. It's a journey where she'll discover who she really is... Indeed she was a weak person who's walking beside the walls - Not until life pushed her hard, then she started learning about 'Who is she?' and 'How strong is she?' The same thing that happens to each and every woman around the world- we all get stronger day by day... To be honest with you - your review is the dearest to my heart. It warned me about how badly my novel needs to be edited - I was planning to delay the edition until I got done with the novel but not anymore, Thank you for such an honest opinion.
A theme like that definitely makes the novel worth reading in itself. I'm sure if I read on, this theme would become apparent, it's not an idea that interests me, but I'm aware that there are many people who will find this theme dear to them. It's wonderful that there are writers like you, dedicated to exploring such unpopular yet significant topics. Also, I want to thank you for understanding my standpoint :)
