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The book has an interesting and comedic type of plot, but the writing quality ruins all of it. I only read 5 chapters, but I can't risk lowering my future English grades just to understand this MTL quality grammar. I'm not kidding at all. It's even worse when it comes to punctuations.
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Ogechukwuchukwu
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🤣🤣 So funny. I agree with you that there are some errors in the first five chapters you read. But it doesn't mean that the rest are the same. Yes, you spotted some errors and mistakes while reading. You correct the author in a way that he or she doesn't feel discouraged. Not that I'm against your opinion on the book. I agree too. There are mistakes at the first five chapters, true. You are an author too, I'm sure. Through the way you commented,I knew you were an author. You want to let an upcoming author know that there's an error in his or her book, you say it nicely. Don't let others be discouraged ok? And thanks for the correction. But I knew about it, and was planning of correcting it, before i saw your comments. Anyways, thanks again
I'm not really sure how you took in my comments, but I genuinely mean no harm in those. I continued reading more chapters after I saw this, and I can say that your book really is a lot easier to read from starting from chapter 10. The only problem in the book that is dominant in all chapters I read is punctuations. Please put a space when putting punctuations. And it would be best if you edit your early chapters. Early chapters are what hooks your readers, so if they don't like it early on, they're unlikely to keep reading. Also, I just wanna say it, but you have talent in writing. Please don't be discouraged by my comments and review.✌
Ogechukwuchukwu:🤣🤣 So funny. I agree with you that there are some errors in the first five chapters you read. But it doesn't mean that the rest are the same. Yes, you spotted some errors and mistakes while reading. You correct the author in a way that he or she doesn't feel discouraged. Not that I'm against your opinion on the book. I agree too. There are mistakes at the first five chapters, true. You are an author too, I'm sure. Through the way you commented,I knew you were an author. You want to let an upcoming author know that there's an error in his or her book, you say it nicely. Don't let others be discouraged ok? And thanks for the correction. But I knew about it, and was planning of correcting it, before i saw your comments. Anyways, thanks again
Don't be surprised if I say this. I'm using a small phone to write. I hardly have a better one dear. When I write, the key presses a different thing. it's hard to control But I always manage. Before you posted your comments,I had borrowed my sister's system. So as to connect to my book. Right now,I'm editing it
Lievel_Veltrandt:I'm not really sure how you took in my comments, but I genuinely mean no harm in those. I continued reading more chapters after I saw this, and I can say that your book really is a lot easier to read from starting from chapter 10. The only problem in the book that is dominant in all chapters I read is punctuations. Please put a space when putting punctuations. And it would be best if you edit your early chapters. Early chapters are what hooks your readers, so if they don't like it early on, they're unlikely to keep reading. Also, I just wanna say it, but you have talent in writing. Please don't be discouraged by my comments and review.✌
Ogechukwuchukwu:And Yes 🤣🤣 I found myself laughing when I saw all the puntuation marks. It was horrible. I didn't publish it that way. My phone must have done that😂😂 But I'm not against you either dear. Just wanted to let you know how I felt
Ogechukwuchukwu:Don't be surprised if I say this. I'm using a small phone to write. I hardly have a better one dear. When I write, the key presses a different thing. it's hard to control But I always manage. Before you posted your comments,I had borrowed my sister's system. So as to connect to my book. Right now,I'm editing it
Lievel_Veltrandt:Oh, so that's what it was! Then please delete this review after you fix it.
Lievel_Veltrandt:I look forward to the edited version. I like how your book starts👍
Ogechukwuchukwu:Okay dear😂 Thanks anyway. I really appreciate your assistance. It was nice😊