Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in Regret No More

Your writing is flawless author! Well edited chapters made it a smooth read for me and I could picture the scenes in mind effortlessly. Great job you did there. One thing which I felt though, was that the flashbacks started way too early. I meam before I could connect with the character I was being given flashbacks and in one chapter there were two, just one after the other... Apart from that, the characters, the plots, the lyrics are all too good and overall it's a good read. Cheers to you. Higly recommended one...