Review Detail of Slave_of_Reality in My Psychopath System

Author Note- To be honest it's kind of a monologue of Jodan (Protagonist of the story). The story begins through his tragic suffering. Throughout his life, he would make mistakes because we humans are bound to make mistakes. Not to mention the fact about the system (As you already know from the title). The world he lives in is similar to ours but a bit developed (Typical Sci-fi + Dark themed) As a new writer, I know it's not the best story out there but I just want to tell you about the story of Jodan. I write for fun. There might be plot holes here and there are also grammatical errors (hopefully not much) so please ignore them. ~You would find unique characters and their developments. ~Unexpected plot twists and turns. ~ Enormous world-building (Could do that gradually throughout chapters) If you like this story leave a review that would help me a lot.