I am enjoed you smut novel more than that. That's just boring. It's was very tedios to read. And I know why. You see, main character is just a tool. From start to 78+ that I read, all his doing it's making plans and trying achieve his goal. That's whould be great. But that's not enough for story. Like there is no adventures, nor romance, nor even enough evil moments. When hes talking with others characters he acts. When he is doing something he acts. Mc doesn't enjoy his life. He just making most right decisions. Honestly, even guy from warlock in the world of magus feels more alive. So as reader, i don't feel any atachment to the mc. I don't feel like I want him to win.
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