Pretty good so far, I read a couple(only one) of chaps in advance. I can say that its a good ff and has potential. (as long as 4th doesn't Fuck it up of course). If you're coming in from one thrust(Pump) man, then don't expect the same thing. For once he's not a horny Fuck and actually wrote something readable! YAY!
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