Writing quality: terrible lazy writing I can honestly say a 5th grade wrote this. Update stability: I can only say thank god he stopped writing. Character development: what? Flash forwards and telling you he’s awesome but… he clearly isn’t and has extemely flawed and clashing actions with what he is said to be. Smh World development : it was non existent.
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