The description is pretty good. However, there are two big problems in the first chapters. Too long introduction and half a chapter is the opening theme of some anime
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LIKEI wanted readers to understand how he was before he reincarnated. I didn't really expect it to last that long. I feel like fanfics recently keep using the same thing for when he goes to another world. the 'I was an orphan and never felt love' thing most people do. It was just too overused so I planned on making something a bit different.