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Well, guys, I think that the writing quality and the character design could be better. Other than that I think I wrote a fine novel at least for my first try.

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ALEX SALVATORE: THE WHITE TIGER (FANFIC OF TEEN WOLF)

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ItIswhatItIsAuthorItIswhatItIs

And guys I forgot to add that I will try my best to keep the series on at least 1 chapter per day.

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ItIswhatItIsAuthorItIswhatItIs

Well guys I already think that it was slow because having a slow heartbeat could only mean 2 things 1 is that a person is sick the other is that a person is supernatural, as any change in heartbeat is too bog of a change to ignore, if I didn't take this way then I would have had to take the way of Stiles and Scott going to a doctor with Alex and having him checked which would be a lot of pain in the ass. And come on think about the number of things that can hurt a bear. You can take it as Malia was hunting it but heard someone coming so she hid and saw him healing the bear and then understanding the bear.

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ItIswhatItIsAuthorItIswhatItIs

But still thanks I will try my best to make it seem less forced the next time.