Review Detail of LuminouShadow in The Devil of Yuragi-sou

To start off the review, . I would like to say, I criticize the author sometimes in the comments, it's mostly bias from myself. But, one should know, you cannot expect to have everything in a single work. And even when I say that, It doesn't make this work any less amazing. When you read the story, you will find some details you will not like, or it wasn't how you assumed it to be. For an example, there were some of us against the harem, and we voiced it, but the author has his own plan. And we respect that, as he calmed us down with his own explanations. So, if you don't have patience to read the A/N, then you will have trouble with the story. As for author and story evaluation: 1.Wrtiting Quality: Like I said writing quality, decent, good grammar, no repetition and details are well-kept, up to the end of volume 1. 2. Updates: The updates are quite fast. But, I do know, it might just be because, the author had more free time, and he too insisted he will do his best to update daily, but life and school catches up, so keep that in mind. And my deepest respect to you author, updating so frequently while writing on a phone. Wheew! I know I can't do that. 3. S. Developement: Story developement is subjective! Not everyone likes all the details that the author thought up. You might like one thing from the meshups while abhore the other. But the mix of the elements have been good so far and I assure you the quality. 4. Character Design. For this I have some criticism. Author did create an OC who was reincarnated as Maou from Hataraku, But author has used the excuse of him being Maou and having his personality over his own. And there are some dissatisfaction about this in the comments, where I my self have thrown some jabs xDD, but he tried to explain his PoV and I can respect that. But hope you decide soon if it's the OC's personality or Maou's personality which is dominant. Other than that the OC at the start felt quite nice for a Demon king but at the end of the Volume 1 it was kinda irritating as his whole personality seemed to shift. A person who didn't bat an eye to sever a whole continent wud let some cat chick off when it tried to kidnap his daughter sheeh. Greater Good dumbledork shit. 5. The world is a meshup of different animes, where the main setting is in the world of Yuuragi sou. . . For a finishing peech, Like I said the story is quite good. You will not find everything going your way. The story belongs the author after all. And if he isn't having fun writing then, it will reflect on when we read. So hope everyone gives this one a read and support the author best you can. Bless you all Whoever read this far.