Review Detail of yokedjaguar in The Wizard called Oz - HP

Item: The Wizard called Oz - HP
Rating: 4

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Good book, grammars clean, the characters are done well, each chapter is a good length. My only problem is the predictability of it and sometimes the characters do something out of character and it feels awkward.

The Wizard called Oz - HP

BoiGeorge

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BoiGeorgeAuthorBoiGeorge

Thanks for the honest review! I'm still finding my feet when it comes to portraying characters so admittingly sometimes ill write something that does seem out of character for one of them. Hopefully I can improve on that as I go :)

3yr